Exposition: Two identical twins John and Jack were born into a poor family during the Industrial Revolution. The parents didn't make enough money to live in a house, instead they lived in a small shed near the alley.
Inciting incident: The parents had ran out of money to buy bread for the family to eat and John was sick at the time.
Rising action: The parents had no choice but to sell John to a rich family so he would never have to worry about starving. The Smith's family needed a heir at the time because they had no children to take over the wealth when they die.
Climax: A few year later John's becomes the heir because his godfather Daniel has died from cholera. His father reveals that he is adopted from a poor family when he was sick and that he has an identical twin.
Falling action: John finds his twin brother Jack and he gives Jack a stack of money to take home to thank his parents for giving him an new life without worrying about basic living essentials.
Resolution: John reunites with his original family, but he was forbidden to bring any of his money over from the rich family that adopted him because his godmother was afraid that he would take all the wealth with him.
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DeleteWell you answered my question. Good story though and it's cool. How did they sell the kid to the rich family?
ReplyDeleteYour story is really unique and I like how you incorporated some history into it. It's very detailed and interesting. Maybe you could also include what happens to the family after they are reunited.
ReplyDeleteStory seems really good, i like how its set in the Industrial Revolution, maybe you could include what his life was like with his new family.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting story and I liked how in the end John ends up helping his family and doesn't turn his back on them.
ReplyDeleteit's kind of confusing in the end. like why they reuinited or he would want to ditch the rich family after helping him? And why would the rich family buy him?
ReplyDeletePretty good story, but i feel like if you were an heir to wealth you should be able to do whatever you want with it. Also some things might be a little wrong.
ReplyDeleteThe story is very interesting, especially how the twins live in two different worlds. Maybe you should include more information on the time and place of the story. How old were the twins after they reunited?
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