my short story does not follow the normal layout
The life of the large family of the Gardizis in Gardiz Afghanistan, which is soon disrupted and destroyed by the communist Russians invading the country forcing the Gardizis to escape and smuggle their way through countries until they have finally come to peace in America while facing conflicts and deaths along the way. 14 members in the family including the mother and father. 12 siblings. 4 siblings dead. both parents dead. 8 left today.
Starts off in beautiful kabul where the Gardizis lived a large beautiful mansion. then to their summer house in Gardiz Afghanistan where the gardizis live in a large beautiful mansion that consists of 3 backyards, 4 stories, a farm, a house for their servants, a river. the house was also shared with other family members and cousins. The whole house was a home to 24 cousins and 6 adults.
President and his family gets killed by Communist Russia, worst day for afghanistan because that is when they knew afghanistan will never be the same. thats when the war started and people had to leave the country if they wanted to survive. in my short story i will write about how my family, the Gardizis escaped afghanistan.
Seems like a good story, good plot twists. You would have never expected it if we didn't know Ben personally.
ReplyDeleteThis is really funny.... although the end really just doesn't fit to the rest of the story. Kind of just cutting to the chase.
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