Exposition: Mr.Bradshaw, A 36-year old history teacher in Chicago, Illinois during the 1970's is being torn apart by the guilt of accidentally running over and killing of one of his students when he was driving under the influence. Determined and convinced that he wont get caught due to the lack of evidence, Mr. Bradshaw still feels a tremendous amount of guilt, shame, remorse, and regret, untimely commiting suicide.
Inciting Incident: He runs over one of his students one night while driving drunk.
Rising Action: Starts taking heavy drugs to avoid the mental pain he is going through such as DMT and heroine.
Climax: During one of his drug trips he hallucinates and sees the student he killed, the hallucination calls out to him and ask him why he has not paid for his crime, which in his head drives him towards more suicidal thoughts.
Falling Action: Mr.Bradshaw stops his drinking and drug use and tries to forget about the incident, he feels that no one can aid him in his situation.
Resolution: Finally decides to commit suicide to put an end to all his pain, he shoots himself in the head with a fully loaded .357 revolver, leaving with nothing but a blood splattered wall and note explaining why he did it.
Likes the use of specific drugs. Interesting mental images that seem very realistic on what drugs can do
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