Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Berhana's 3 draft


As the weeks passed on by Halley had gotten to know all of the people in her class

really well. In all of her classes she had spoken to everyone at least once. She was

becoming a social butterfly. However in math class Halley really liked Brian.

Everyone called him a nerd because he knew too much and was too weird.  Halley

didn’t believe that being really smart made you weird. Whenever Halley went into

math class she looked at Brian and smiled and he smiled back. They sat next to each other so they 

would always lapse into conversation when the teacher wasn't in the room yet. On some occasions 

Halley even ate lunch with him because he never had lunch with anyone. He told her that he didn't 

like being nerdy. He wanted people to like him and once he even cried. He told Halley that she was 

the one person in the school that he felt comfortable speaking to. Halley especially enjoyed hanging 

out with Brittney, Sophie, and Kyra. They talked about anything mostly school related stuff. She 

liked Kyra especially because she had a great sense of humor. Whenever she said something funny 

the four of them would burst out laughing and couldn't stop. Halley hated having to wave good 

bye to them at the end of the day. Besides seeing her friends at school Halley loved nothing more 

than coming home to her mom and dad and Sparky, her puppy. Every night she called, emailed, 

and texted her friends. Her parents only allowed this because she agreed to be in bed before 

her curfew and she was only allowed a few minutes. This was because if she stayed up too late she 

would be real cranky in the mornings and be a drag on her parents. The other reason was because 

they said growing children need a decent amount of sleep each night.

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