Paola Sanchez Story Proposal
Inciting Incident: Arabella is a very humble person who does well in school, but starts hanging out with the wrong crowd and starts to cause trouble.
Rising Action: Arabella starts ditching school, stealing money from her parents , and drinking. She soon gets expelled from school.
Climax: Her parents find out that she gets suspended and are very upset with her that they don't know what to do with her because she has gotten out of control.
Resolution: They have decided to send her to boot camp for three months.
Three months have passed and Arabella is sent back home. She says sorry to her parents and says that boot camp has changed her behavior.
I like the rising action, and how this relates to some teenagers lives is good. However, one thing I'd like to know more about is how boot camp is going to be for her. Is she a bad kid there? Does she stay good for a bit and then go back to her old behavior or has it completely changed her life?
ReplyDeleteI really like the name you put on the main character but i feel like you should put more information that change up the story so its unique.
ReplyDeleteI think this is really interesting although make sure you add a lot of extra information on the character.
ReplyDeleteYou could go into why she starts misbehaving, maybe she has issues with her parents at home, or she's depressed, or mabey being bullied at school and feels like she needs to be tougher.
ReplyDeleteThe story's set up sounds pretty good and the overall plot is interesting but when you write your story I suggest that you put detail in the transition of the main character from a the smart and humble person to the trouble making teen she becomes.
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