Exposition: After a plane crash a man ( charlie) is left in the wilderness with two other people, stuck in the middle of the rain forest.
Inciting incident: Traveling to Brazil charlie survives a plane crash with two other people in the Brazilian rain forest.
rising action: The two other people are getting agitated that food is minimal and civilization is miles away. They encounter many dangerous situations and animals along the way.
climax: The two people go crazy because of lack of food and decide that charlie is the deceiving them and steeling the minimal amount of food behind their backs. They chase him through the forest trying to kill him.
falling action: Charlie trips and hits his head on a log. He hallucinates before being found by a native tribe.
resolution: The tribe brings charlie into civilization, but they never find the two other people again.
I like your imagination
ReplyDeleteI would suggest that you say what the dangerous encounters where.
You're on the right track
Your story is really unique, i like how you had charlie found by a native tribe, very cool.
ReplyDeleteI like the wilderness setting, but you have to go into more detail concerning the plot.
ReplyDeleteYour story could have potential to be really good, have a lot of characterization and make sure your story flows.
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