Inciting Incident: Growing up in a poor family, Wu Young was a social outcast. One day, Wu young gets in trouble with a few gang members who kept picking on him because of his social status. Wu Young decides to stand up for himself talk trash at them.
Rising Action: One of the boys named Sheng Yi was infuriated from Wu Young's offending words. Later that afternoon, Wu young finds a suspicious note in his locker. The note was from Sheng Yi, challenging Wu Young to a fight after school. Wu Young decides to ignore the note as he wishes to avoid any threat. Then, after school, he is confronted by the gang of boys. Wu Young is surrounded and forced to fight Sheng Yi.
Climax: The fight starts as Sheng Yi makes the first attack. Using his brute ruthless force, Sheng Yi attempts to strike at Wu Young. As Wu Young dodges his fists, he seeks an opportunity to strike. Using his sharp martial arts skills, Wu Young shockingly defeats Sheng Yi with a back spin kick in the shin and uses his fists to deliver a series of blows to the face. Sheng Yi is unable to counter, and shortly faints. The fight was over and Wu Young was victorious.
Falling Action: Moments after the fight, the ambulance and police arrived to the scene. Wu Young is arrested and is mistakenly blamed and charged with crime. After Wu Young is sent home, his parents are informed of the recent situation involving the fight. Wu Young knows that he's in trouble, and his reputation had only been getting worse.
Resolution: Wu Young's parents make a hard decision and send Wu Young to California America, where he will can be safe and start a new life.
I like the ending of your story, I find it a bit unexpected and exciting. It is nice to see someone stand up for themselves. Maybe at the end you should add something about what he feels/what hes gained from this experience.
ReplyDeleteThis story is very intriguing and i like how he defeats him in the end. However maybe you should describe Wu Youngs reputation with the gang and why he's hated so much.
ReplyDeleteI really like the plot of the story, but if he grew up in a poor family how can he afford to watch movies like Green Hornet and Fist of Fury.
ReplyDeleteIt kind of sounds like Bruce Lee's childhood so maybe add some more things to differ. Also include more martial arts things in it.
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