Exposition: A girl is meticulously organizing her room, she assigns certain objects in her room different meanings and representations that reflect the troubles in her life.
Inciting Incident: She begins organizing her room, and at first she cannot keep any of her shoes together because to her, nothing stays in a pair. She is referencing the bad relationships she has gone through and her own parents bad relationships.
Rising Action: She continues to organize things in a bizarre manner, and enters a calm rage. Part of her sees fault in what she is doing but she cannot control her strong emotions. She eventually becomes insane. Throughout this time there are signs that she has a perfectly normal life. She doesn't have mental problems
Climax:
She attempts to organize herself, at this point she in a trance, taking extreme measures. Possibly preforming acts of self mutilation etc.
Falling action: She begins to see what she has done wrong, and fixes it.
Resolution: A description of her perfectly organized room.
Theme: Don't bottle up your anger/
a). I liked how you used the arrangements of objects to represent the complications in a girls life.
ReplyDeleteb). I didn't understand what her mental problems were
c). It reminds me of Memento when he was trying to organize his objects representing his life
I liked your use of vocabulary
ReplyDeleteWhat were her problems?
I would suggest that you add some things to the falling action like what she did wrong
I like the idea of this girl going crazy and nobody really knows except for her. However, I don't see much exposition. How old is this girl, and where does she live? Does she end up getting help? I love the proposal so far, but I'd like to know more about the girl and have more details!
ReplyDeleteI like your story proposal and think that you used very good vocabulary words for the story.
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