Exposition: Story is set during the feudal era in Japan in Hiroshima. In a rural village controlled by the government. Main characters name is Daigo Miyaki, a son of a well known family of samurais and child prodigy.
Inciting incident: After his family is framed for the destruction of the village and are executed in front of him, Daigo seeks out revenge to go the Ganju clan, the group responsible for the conspiracy.
Rising action: He goes after the nine main officials, killing them one by one in vengeance.
Climax: After killing them all he discovers that the shogunate is the master behind the conspiracy and instead uses Daigo to kill the 9 officials to give him more power.
Falling action/resolution: After killing his old leader, he sees his life meaningless because he had lost everything. He then takes his own life to end everything.
Preston, this story reminds me of the story i wrote in 8th grade with Preshiko.Whose his old leader?
ReplyDeleteI liked how you set it in feudal japan.
ReplyDeleteMaybe give a mental aspect about why he kills himself.
I like the exposition of the story. I was confused about whose Daigo's old leader. I suggest you to add more information about the Ganju clan.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you mentioned a historical event. It was confusing when you said main characters but there was only one main character.
ReplyDeleteI like the Inciting incident, it seems like a story I could easily get into.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added the historical even into it. Its seems like it will be very interesting.
ReplyDeleteThe setting of your story is interesting, are you going to describe how he kills each one of the nine officials? That may make your story very long.
ReplyDeleteI like the exciting turning points in your story. I suggest that you include a brief description of the Ganju clan's background
ReplyDeleteYour story has an interesting setting and period,and the plot about vengeance also sounds very intriguing.
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