Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Bianca A's Proposal

Exposition: There was a girl named Anastasia who lived in Los Angeles, California. She was 19 years old and the last time she saw her mother was when she was 3.

Inciting Incident: She asked her father what happened to her mother and why wasn't she around. He tells her that she left 3 years after she was born with no explanation.


Rising Action: Anastasia was determined to meet her mother and ask why she left. She walks around asking people and visiting old place trying to find out where her mother is.


Climax: She finds this old homeless lady who says Anastasia's mom is living in a small apartment by the beach. She finds her mother there.


Falling Action: They finally have the conversation she has wanted. 


Resolution: Anastasia reunites with her mom and continues talking with her and they try to build a good mother-daughter relationship. 

4 comments:

  1. sounds like an interesting story but maybe been done already, you could add a special twist to make it original like her mom is mental or depressed or a mermaid.

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    1. Don't worry I'm planning on making them mermaids!

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  2. Like donnaleah said, I'm not sure if this is very original. I love the story idea, and it's fun because nobody else is doing something like this in the class, but I feel you should add more details that are out of the ordinary!

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  3. This sounds like a movie! But it's really clever. Be sure to characterize the people she meets really well.

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