Exposition: An agent named Dallas McCoy from Cleveland, Ohio and has recently been transferred to Chicago, Illinois to be a mole in the crime syndicate in order to crack down on the cities most notorious crime lord.
Inciting Incident: He's given information on where all the crime lords are going to meet up to discuss business.
Rising Action: Secretly pretending to be a secretary of a Crime Lord. He discovers vital confidential information regarding the crime lords future plans and attempts to transfer it to the police
Climax: Dallas McCoy gets caught after he stumbles across a security protocol.
Falling Action: The Crime Lord takes Dallas to an abandoned building in an attempt to interrogate and execute Dallas.
Resolution: An explosion happens in background and the police raid the building.
A) That story has a really good plot.
ReplyDeleteC) The only suggestion i have is to add to the climax to make it even cooler than it already is.
I really like the exposition. The story was really straight-foward and clear. It would be better if you add a little more detail about what happened when he stepped on the security protocol
ReplyDeleteI liked the story plot but the ending was confusing what happened to Dallas McCoy?
ReplyDeleteI feel like the story won't be detailed enough because it seems too short. Maybe add some more climatic scenes or characters.
ReplyDeleteThe plot is very exciting. However, the resolution seems sudden. How did the police track the location of the crime lords?. What happens to Dallas McCoy? Do the crime lords get caught and arrested?
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